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Divorce Haiku
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My backlit shoulders
were massive in the shadow
on our bedroom wall.
were massive in the shadow
on our bedroom wall.
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Two other titles came to mind: "Insecurity" or "Please remember that"
Also, I played around with the last line a bit--if either of the titles above had worked out, I'd have put "your" instead of "our."
Anyway, thoughts?
Also, I played around with the last line a bit--if either of the titles above had worked out, I'd have put "your" instead of "our."
Anyway, thoughts?
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Maybe just "Divorce" or maybe "Divorce Haiku" is okay.. Not sure. I really like this one.